Monday, November 15, 2010

What is this Device Called, if it is one at all?

I wrote a poem inspired by  a relationship I was uncertain of.  In the poem, I connected a few metaphores; with a twist:

"...not even the beautiful stars seem to help.
They shine and they twinkle,
but they're as cold, and as sharp
as the edge of this road,
And that knife in your hand
is your heart on the lamb..."
This is the metaphorical device I'm wondering about.  This connection I made with  the "edge" of the road being cold and sharp like the knife... in actuality the knife is a metaphore, but the edge of the road is actual.
Also, the "Is your heart on the lamb" is as much a question as it is a fear.

The poem starts out:  "Walking this lonely highway again"

I'm saying the knife is the girls reluctance to be anyone's. 
"on the lamb" is what prison escapees are... they are running from captivity.
The poem continues:

"or is your heart dwawn closer to a past;
hoping for a day that may never come,
but keeping me just in case."

Tell me your thoughts.  Leave a comment.

Monday, November 01, 2010

Beethoven Symphony No. 5, 3rd mvt--Arturo Toscanini/NBC Symp

This is so good that I wasirrestably compelled to post it here... so good! Bravo!

Saturday, October 16, 2010

19th Century "Breakup" Poem

Krissy Dunn Johnson discusses a 19th century "breakup" poem, one of the more unusual documents in the museum's archives. The poem was sent by a women named Fannie to a Mr. L. Holcombe during the Civil War.



Friday, September 03, 2010

Anchor of Sentiment

By Daniel Taverne

1.
Mildred met Tommy on a warm, cloudless August morning when she was supposed to be pulling weeds from her mother’s garden.

Instead of pulling weeds though, she, comfortably nestled within the tall corn stalks, was sitting on a rock in the center of the garden putting pen to paper, working on a poem.

The big rock, a fixture in her consciousness now, had been there as far back as she could remember, and it seemed to grow out of the center of the garden like a giant potato.

It was a big garden; at least an acre, and almost perfectly square. Strangely, although she looked, no other rocks even half its size could be found anywhere near her father’s farm.

The year was 1940, and eighteen year old Tommy Branson, hauling hay to the local feed and seed for his dad had a blowout. He ka-thumped to a dusty stop on Fairchild road, directly in front of old man White’s vegetable garden.

Out of the truck and looking at the disabled tire, the tall, red haired, lanky, boyish man suddenly Realized the spare was ten miles away leaning against the barn, so he helplessly kicked at a nearby dirt clump, solving nothing.

He knew he should have put the spare in the truck like his father said, but since the newly licensed driver was in a hurry to get behind the wheel of the truck, he didn’t bother with that insignificant, little detail.

Setting out for help across Mr. White’s field, Tommy carefully began stepping over, or between rows of radishes, cucumbers, beans, carrots, tomatoes, beans and corn.

Gradually picking up speed, he could hear his father’s admonishing voice saying, “See what happens when you don’t pay attention to what you’re doing?” He picked up the pace even more, and before long he was running.

Half way across the garden, Tommy’s foot caught on a downed corn stalk and he too went down. With a grunt, his head painfully connected with something very hard. A few moments later he discovered what it was. He also met Mildred.
2.
Eleven year old Emily Branson threw her body weight against the large rounded rock, but it didn’t budge.

Smiling, observing Emily’s experiment, her grandmother Mildred said, “It’s a giant paper weight. It keeps the garden from blowing away.”

Amused by the thought of an entire garden flying through the air, Emily nodded her head and laughed as unseen fingers flipped much of her long blonde hair into her face. “I think my hair needs a paper weight too! She exclaimed.

Sliding her delicate hands over its smooth surface, she regarded the rock as if memorizing its every detail.

It was at least half as tall as her, and when hugging it, her arms barely held half its circumference.

“That rock is very special, you know?” Mildred asked.

“How could a plain old rock be special?”

“Well, I was sitting right there when I met your grampa. I should say, when ‘he’ met me. He came out of nowhere, fell, and hit his head right there!” She exclaimed; pointing. Mildred filled Emily in on that long ago day’s events, then abruptly changed her tone.

Growing somber, she stated flatly, “before he left for the war, we’d come out to the garden, sit on that rock and we’d talk for hours.” Mildred looked up into the blue sky; exhaling somberly. Then shaking her head, she repeated, “We’d talk for hours.”

“After he…” She took another loud breath. “…died, I found I have always felt closer to him when I was out here.”

“Look, see those marks right there?” She pointed at some faint scratches on the side facing away from Emily.

“These?” Emily asked; running her fingers across faint patterns of vertical slashes.

“Your grampa made those scratches when he wasn’t much older than you are. With his pocket knife, he scratched one mark for every evening we spent out here talking.

While Mildred’s attention was diverted toward the sound of a truck turning off of Fairchild road, Emily quietly counted the scratches. “Wow! There are a lot of scratches here.”

“Ninety-six of them.” Mildred said without looking back.

She then turned around pointing. “See that flat spot right there on top?” Mildred asked. “That’s where your mom set her dolls down to play house while I tended the garden. She used to make her dolls dance there too, saying the rock was Broadway.”

“Couldn’t we live here?” Emily asked.

“No. I’m afraid not. I needed the money to make sure we’d be okay in the city.”

“I miss Mom.” Emily stated.

“I know.” Mildred reassured. “That’s why I’m having this rock moved to our garden in the city. It’s going to be the paper weight that holds our new garden down. And, I want you to have it. I want you to know our family history and to be able to share it with your family one day.”

Mildred motioned for the driver to pull close to where she was standing. The driver complied, and 30 minutes later, with the help of the trucks other two passengers, the rock was loaded up and carried away.

Mildred stood there staring down at the disturbed soil where the rock had been and recounting the emotions she’d experienced here in the center of this garden, sobbed.

“What’s this?” Emily asked.

She knelt, cleared some dirt away from a round protrusion, and soon after grabbing a stick, using it to assist in the dig, She had unearthed a large glass jar.

Looking inside, she discovered a folded piece of paper. Dated August 18, 1950, and in her daughter’s hand, Mildred read the note aloud:

“This poem is about a rock:

The sun is shining down
I will not frown;
And the warm breeze carrying butterflies along
are my daddy’s whispers, a loving song.

Momma says that I belong and shows me evidence
of days long gone.
Scratches in the side, and a look in her eye;
Rather than a paper weight, it’s an Anchor of Sentiment
Keeping loving memories within reach.

Monday, August 23, 2010

Imagery Discussion - Part 2

Imagery is grreat because imagery is what people remember.

By linking the images together, you can creat a mood, a feeling.

Imagery gives color to words.

A cloud for instance, can be a puffy cotton ball slowly easing away in the western sky. Or a cloud can be a dark angry God tossing lighting bolts at the ground like crooked glowing speers.

Do you see how imagery paints a picture?

If you’d like to bounce some images off me, for my opinion, leave a comment or sign my guestbook.

Thanks.

Realization of Realization

.By Daniel Taverne
.
Beautiful birds
bound in a box
that's oval in shape
they fight to get out.

If you stood there Miss,
by their nest,
would you end their struggle
by killing them?

If you answered this question,
realization of life,
before it is seen
has not been neglected.

Essay by Daniel Taverne

Walking Away

Contrary to my beliefs, the world is telling my family and I what to feel, what to wear, what to say, what to eat, where to go, and what to do! And because of this, my children are driving me crazy!

After preparing a home cooked meal, they’re always hollering at the dinner table, “Yuck! I don’t eat that?” Then, an hour later they have the nerve to whine, “I’m hungry, but there’s nothing here to eat!” Also, while getting ready for school, they disapprovingly whine stuff like, “These pants you bought me suck and I need new shoes to go with my hoody!” Even more unsettling, my older daughter is 3 months pregnant and talking about getting an abortion. Rather than deal with these issues, I’m going to walk away!

Walking away will make it easier for me to ignore her and her boyfriend drinking beer and smoking joints in her room tonight, and as long as she doesn’t come out of there hollering she’s hungry, my walk will continue.


I’ve got worries outside my home as well! For one, I’ve got a weird neighbor who appears to be one of those NRA nuts, and he’s always carrying a shotgun or rifle to his truck to go hunting. This is another problem I’m just going to walk away from. I mean, where is he really going? And will the news that he or his kid shooting up unsuspecting targets interrupt my walk? It’s surely happened before. Remember Columbine?

Something else bugging me is when visiting someone I expect to get treated as a guest, and offered refreshments and food and conversation. I’ll not receive these though from my oncologist if I make tomorrows visit. Instead I’ll get a needle in the ass and a bill for two hundred dollars. Fortunately, I’ll be a no-show because I’ll be walking.


Lately, I’ve been frightened by news stories telling me North Korea has nukes and that Iran is about to have them too. So when I come across these stories, I either ignore them and keep walking strait, or I turn and walk the other way. You see, the walking gets my mind off situations I can’t change.


Compounding my need to walk, my liberty seems to have been purchased and blurred by the blood, sweat and sacrifice of an unwanted God that I can’t seem to ignore. This God has interrupted every other walk I had ever taken; prodding me like a bully, willing me to bite, and I do. Time and time again, I bite.

Maybe this time I’ll be able to tune out that bully and walk away for good. If I can tune out that God, this walk will be easy. It’ll help make all my values fade, so I’ll not feel responsible for fixing problems, since while walking, they won’t matter anyway. Sadly, the more I think about these issues, the more I realize I’m tired of this town, this state, this country and this life. So I’m walking away.


I’m walking away, and all I’m bringing with me are muted, smothered, squelched and covered up conflicts the result of which, unabated, only serve to tear me up inside. Fortunately, walking reduces my problems to nothing more than whimpers, and I’ll be too busy walking to acknowledge such small sounds.

Will flies gather? Of course they will. I know they’ll join me, and when they do, it’ll be perfectly fine. By then, I’ll be clapping and laughing right along with everyone else since my accommodating nose will finally be unable to detect the dung that we’re walking in.


Another problem, when walking, I’ll no longer have to worry about whether or not our government is as crooked as the day is long, and I won’t be around to care about tomorrow’s illegal search of my neighbor’s home.


Oh I love being able to walk away so much I often make my three year old walk away with me. Even more often than that, I impatiently sit her down and prod her to walk in one direction, so I can go in the other room and walk someplace else. Some people say this is unhealthy for children. I say, if you’re not too busy walking away yourself, prove it!

© Daniel Taverne Jan 2009

"Reference: Poem "Bull Dung and Flies" 1999 Daniel Taverne.

Thursday, April 15, 2010

Love Poem Challange: Say I Love you Without Saying, "I Love You"

Here is an example:

Golden Strands

Golden Strands cascade from my hands;
gently dancing,
Like a mountain waterfall;
Splashing.

Oh I could live
the rest of my years
running my fingers
 through your sof golden curls.

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Have you ever tried expressing your love for someone without using those words?  Give it a try. 

Use the comment linkand post your contribution.  I'll post all reasonable poems here on this site.

Thanks for stopping bye.

Daniel Taverne
Snapshots of Life Poetry

Monday, April 12, 2010

How to write a Certain Kind of Poem - VIDEO

Writing a poem in iambic pentameter requires writing five metrical feet in a specific rhythm. Write a poem in iambic pentameter with tips from a produced playwright in this free video on writing.


Expert: Laura Turner

Bio: Laura Turner received her B.A. in English from the University of the South in Sewanee, Tenn., graduating magna cum laude with honors. Her plays have been seen and heard from Alaska to Tennessee.

Filmmaker: Todd Green


Thursday, April 08, 2010

Word Discussion Topic: Imagery

Why are some things easier to remember than others.  Why are sequences of numbers difficult, yet stories are easier.  Let me suggest that stories are image driven, while numbers in and of them selves don't tell any story, save patterns.

When I was in college, yes I "was" in college I bought a 'memory' book from the bookstore.  That book, and the techniques taught me a lot about imagery.  Imagery provides a way for a poets audience to internalize a writing and provoke some sort of response.  It doesn't matter so muc, in my opinion, if the poet gets the desired response as much as long as one is provoked.

Another benefit of imagery is its way of letting the readers know who we are, where we've been and helps to steer the reader in a thought or emotion.

Imagery warms words, giving them color and substance that they may not otherwise hold. 

What is a tree for example.  Is it a solid, rooted thickly relic of time?  Or is it a dry twig stuck in a barron field of clover? 

It's all up to the poet.

Add Your comment to the discussion, and thanks for visiting.